justifying an argument

justifying an argument

why should students wear school uniform

I  really think that kids need school uniforms. Students need school uniform
because it shows what school you go to and it is showing  respect to your
school. All children from other schools they all look tidy looking. But having a
uniform can be a safety net for many students who might otherwise …
be unsafe. Parents can see you because they know what school you go
to you need school uniform. We need school uniform because when you go
on a trip and you go to a museum and they cant find you because your in
clothes not school uniform .

banned school uniform

School Uniforms Are a Bad Idea and School Uniforms Should Be Banned.
In the past ... Despite such changes, all states are not compelled to require
uniforms. However ... It can be said that they are selling their uniforms not
because the students need it, but because they can earn lots from it.
We should banned school uniform because it is too dare and you spend
your money on uniform it’s too much

Comment below which one is better banned school uniform
or why should students wear school uniform
write why you choose it

Justifying an argument

Justifying an argument

WALT: justify our ideas using conjunctions

Check out the two paragraphs and then answer the questions below

Author A:

I strongly believe that students need school uniforms. Students need school uniforms because
they show people what school they go to. All of the students look tidy because they are in the same
school and its like free advertising because when people see the uniform they think of the school.
So yeah, school uniforms are good.

Author B:

I firmly believe that school uniforms should be banned. School uniforms are costly and they put
a lot of pressure on the student’s caregivers. Children need new school uniforms every time they
grow and change schools. With some items of clothing costing a hundred dollars or more,

the cost involved in buying a new school uniform is huge! It is particularly difficult for families

with two or more students, as it is hard enough to feed a large family let alone buy an expensive
school uniform every year for each child. School uniforms should be banned for the benefit of
parents everywhere!

Which argument do you think is stronger?  B

What vocabulary do the authors use that you would like to steal?

Expensive , difficult, particulary,

What did you like about the paragraphs?

I like that they were trying to save their money for food and clothes  uniforms a so dare that
u can’t really afford.

What do you think the authors could improve on?

On B it’s got more better words like banne

Highlight the signposts (topic sentences) the authors use in purple.

Highlight the conjunctions or connecting words (for, because, and, but…) that the authors use in
blue.

because i said so

Because I Said So?

WALT: justify our ideas using conjunctions.

Why should we have separate - We should be having a school with girls and boys school
so we can all be together and be happy other school have a girl school that's not aloud
to have boys in only girls and there is a boy school that only have boys. And we should have a
talk with the gravement saying can you put girls and boys in the same school so
we can learn how to respect a girl and a girl respect a boy. Then they can friends and
we won’t have anymore fight and you could get some help from boys in learning and boys
ask the girl is they could get help and we should use kind words.

1. We should be learning with boys and girls
2. We should be respecting boys and girls
3. We should be helping girls and boys
4. We should be talking with boys and girls
5. We should not  be fight each other

Because we are not like that’s why we should be in the same school and learn to be nice to
one another so when we grow up we will be nice to girls and boys.

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