Monday, 25 June 2018
Wednesday, 13 June 2018
the red moon
There was once a little grey planet that was very sad. The people living there hadn't looked after it, despite them having all the inventions and space ships you could ever need. They had contaminated the whole countryside so much with rubbish and pollution that there were no plants or animals left.
One day, a little boy was walking on the planet, when he passed a cave and noticed a small red flower inside. The flower was very sick - almost dying - so the boy carefully dug up the flower, with roots, soil and everything. Then, he started looking for a place where he could look after it. He searched all over the planet, but everywhere was so contaminated that there was no place the flower could possibly live in. Then he looked up at the sky and noticed the moon. It seemed to the boy that maybe the plant could survive there.
So the little boy put on his astronaut suit, and climbed into a spaceship. He put the little red flower in the back, and off they went to the moon.
Far away from all that pollution - and with the boy visiting it every day to tend it - the flower started to grow. The flower was so well cared for, that it had soon germinated, giving birth to others, and these other flowers spread onto other flowers. Before long, the whole moon was completely covered with flowers.
That's why, whenever the little boy's flowers open up, for a few minutes the moon takes on a soft red sheen, like a warning light. Maybe it's telling us that if you don't look after your planet, a day will come when flowers will only be able to grow on the moon.
Who do you think this story is written for? It is showing you that there was pollution there and rubbish everywhere.
How do you know this?
Because it says it in the story the message
Who do you think the artwork is designed for?
To show people to remember the things they loved
What is the message behind the story?
They are trying to tell people to remember.
How do you know what the message is?
Because it is showing them
What do you like about this piece of writing?
It is pretty good for people to remember and help i am sad that it was pollution there was a lot of rubbish.
What don’t you like about this text?
I don’t like about it when it is pollution and there is a lot of rubbish everywhere.
Tuesday, 12 June 2018
An Effective Leader
What Makes an Effective Leader?
Introduction - we are going to be asking about what effective leaders.
Paragraph 1 - What makes a person a good leader ? by listening to the teacher
or listening to your tutor or the coach who ever it is that makes you a good leader.
By not talking about your life you need to focus on your work you can talk about
it when your not a school.
Paragraph 2 - what a good leader does ? you need to stop think and do before you
do it why because that’s how you get good grades and that’s how you become a
good leader that’s is what a good leader does
Paragraph 3 - why do we need to become a leader? So you can show what you
can do and if you are scared just practice and face your fear. Practice everyday
before you get chosen
Paragraph 4 - why is so important being a leader? It is very good to be a good leader
because you can learn more and find more information about what your going to be
saying. It is very fun to do it.
Paragraph 5 - am i ready for whatever's coming ? yes why i said yes
because it is good for you. Why so people know what’s happening
today and who won anything they did they need people to shake peoples
hands when they received what they have gotten.
Conclusion - i have finished talking about why is it so important being a
leader it is very important .
The end of the writing
Tuesday, 22 May 2018
bastion points
Bastion points facts
Facts 1 # bastion points the
land was occupied by Ngati
what and before the
colonization
of new Zealand it was
part of important lands for the
iwiw tribe overlooking rich fishing
and farming areas.
land was occupied by Ngati
what and before the
colonization
of new Zealand it was
part of important lands for the
iwiw tribe overlooking rich fishing
and farming areas.
Facts 2# Bastion point new
Zealand they began to buy land
from iwi. Pakea were very eager
to buy land so that they could
settle in New Zealand
from iwi. Pakea were very eager
to buy land so that they could
settle in New Zealand
Facts 3 # Bastion point is This
promontory above Tāmaki Drive
has come to symbolize Māori land
issues. It was given to the Crown
by Ngāti Whātua as a defense site
during the Russian scare of 1885.
In 1977–78 a 506-day protest
against a proposed Crown sale was
held there.
promontory above Tāmaki Drive
has come to symbolize Māori land
issues. It was given to the Crown
by Ngāti Whātua as a defense site
during the Russian scare of 1885.
In 1977–78 a 506-day protest
against a proposed Crown sale was
held there.
Facts 4 # On 25 May 1978, when
the government sent in a massive
force of police and army
personnel to evict the occupiers,
protesters were arrested and their
temporary meeting house,
buildings, and gardens were
demolished.
the government sent in a massive
force of police and army
personnel to evict the occupiers,
protesters were arrested and their
temporary meeting house,
buildings, and gardens were
demolished.
Thursday, 17 May 2018
questions about homeless people
Why do homeless people get on the street ?
Did you know that homeless people are very poor and very
sick? It is very sad that they got kick out and they slept on the
sides of the streets and they lived there the rubbish rats mouses.
\They write a sign and says can you help me please I need
money.
What happened to homeless people?
These people could have been kicked out of
home or they may have been unable to pay rent.
Did you know that homeless people are very poor and very
sick? It is very sad that they got kick out and they slept on the
sides of the streets and they lived there the rubbish rats mouses.
They write a sign and says can you help me please I need
money.
Why is homeless a problem? It is a big issue because
homeless people have been living on the street people have
been seeing them and they haven't been helpful they should
because they have no food. If you don't help them they will
probably pass away They really need help they need a new no
clue clothes Here in it
Why is there a lot of homeless people on the street?
Because they have been kicked out of their homes because
of they
couldn't pay for it because they didn't have any more money.
Why are they always putting signs up?
Because they can get some money and they could by
something like food or drinks or clothes that is why they put
them
sides out.
In conclusion, this is about how to keep homeless people safe
and keep them out of danger. Because there is a lot of danger
around the world they could get snatched out of nowhere
because they are on the street that is why
people should keep an eye out for homeless people.
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