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Monday 30 April 2018

Holidays


  Holidays

On Wednesday night my cousins were coming over to stay the night to come visit us because we haven't seen them before they are from my mum side. They bring their devices to go on and they play robloxs. Then we went to go get some food and drinks at countdown so we can eat on Thursday we went to go get some lollies and went to pick up my sister. Friday that’s when they were going so we bought 8 pizzas and they went at 6:00 because it was my cousin's netball game. Monday,30,April 2018 I hope you like it what I did in the holidays.

Thursday 12 April 2018

respect


this is what you really need to do because i have't been seeing you do this.

respecting


this is about how to respect people and and property so everybody keeps safe about keeps your important things safe.

tigers


Tigers

This is a fact about a tiger. Why are tigers important

and why should we care



                           


Tigers are important because Sumatran tigers can be saved from extinction by ensuring
their habitat is protected from land conversion, said Sunarto, a tiger specialist with World
Wildlife Fund (WWF) Indonesia. "Therefore, saving tigers also means saving their large habitat.

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Why do tigers have stripes ? Tigers are hunter. They have to wait, hide and hunt to get
enough meat for there survival. They have stripes so that, they can easily hide from their prey.
The Orange colour stripe helps them to blend with the wild grasses and groundcovers which …





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Why do tigers hunt for animals ? Tiger hunting is the capture and killing of tigers.
Humans are the tigers most significant predator and illegal poaching is a major threat to the tigers.
The Bengal tiger is the most common subspecies of tiger constituting approximately 80% of the entire
tiger population and is found in Bangladesh, Bhutan, Myanmar, Nepal,


THE END!!!!!!!!


Monday 9 April 2018

Crunchie vc picnic

Crunchie vc picnic


I think Picnic has a lot of yummy ingredients. They make their chocolate so yummy that you will be dreaming about it in bed. It was so hard to compete with there chocolate since people love picnic even I love a picnic. But here is something you don’t know about Picnic.Picnic make you sick if you are Allergic to peanuts so that is why you shouldn't buy picnic You shouldn’t buy picnic because it comes from a a different country which is Australia. If you are allergic to peanuts you don’t want to buy picnic you should buy kit kat

crunchie

Chocolate Challenge


Crunchie
 Tehillah- Crunchie is yum because it is full of flavour. If you eat Crunchie you will have the best feeling ever. I have tasted it. It tasted like a mouth full of yumminess. The ingredients they have will make you fell in love with crunchie. Maria - Crunchie has a lot of ingredients in. It has golden hokey pokey honeycomb covered in cadbury milk chocolate. It has 931kg of energy, 7.5g 11% 14.9% fat and the Sugar 31.4g 35%
62.8g. The Chocolate makes you happy if you are
feeling sad. Ayla- Crunchie has all the ingredients.
Chocolate Covered Honeycomb Crunchie bars based on the
Cadbury Crunchie candy bar, these gorgeous chocolate treats
contain only 6 ingredients and are gluten-free, vegan
and fabulously good. 







crunchie pictures

Thursday 5 April 2018

justifying an argument

justifying an argument
Image result for people in clothes
Image result for school uniform

why should students wear school uniform



I  really think that kids need school uniforms. Students need school uniform
because it shows what school you go to and it is showing  respect to your
school. All children from other schools they all look tidy looking. But having a
uniform can be a safety net for many students who might otherwise …
be unsafe. Parents can see you because they know what school you go
to you need school uniform. We need school uniform because when you go
on a trip and you go to a museum and they cant find you because your in
clothes not school uniform .


banned school uniform
School Uniforms Are a Bad Idea and School Uniforms Should Be Banned.
In the past ... Despite such changes, all states are not compelled to require
uniforms. However ... It can be said that they are selling their uniforms not
because the students need it, but because they can earn lots from it.
We should banned school uniform because it is too dare and you spend
your money on uniform it’s too much

Comment below which one is better banned school uniform
or why should students wear school uniform
write why you choose it

Wednesday 4 April 2018

Justifying an argument

Justifying an argument
WALT: justify our ideas using conjunctions


Check out the two paragraphs and then answer the questions below


Author A:
I strongly believe that students need school uniforms. Students need school uniforms because
they show people what school they go to. All of the students look tidy because they are in the same
school and its like free advertising because when people see the uniform they think of the school.
So yeah, school uniforms are good.


Author B:
I firmly believe that school uniforms should be banned. School uniforms are costly and they put
a lot of pressure on the student’s caregivers. Children need new school uniforms every time they
grow and change schools. With some items of clothing costing a hundred dollars or more,
the cost involved in buying a new school uniform is huge! It is particularly difficult for families
with two or more students, as it is hard enough to feed a large family let alone buy an expensive
school uniform every year for each child. School uniforms should be banned for the benefit of
parents everywhere!


Which argument do you think is stronger?  B


What vocabulary do the authors use that you would like to steal?
Expensive , difficult, particulary,


What did you like about the paragraphs?
I like that they were trying to save their money for food and clothes  uniforms a so dare that
u can’t really afford.


What do you think the authors could improve on?
On B it’s got more better words like banne


Highlight the signposts (topic sentences) the authors use in purple.


Highlight the conjunctions or connecting words (for, because, and, but…) that the authors use in
blue.