Monday 25 June 2018
Wednesday 13 June 2018
the red moon
There was once a little grey planet that was very sad. The people living there hadn't looked after it, despite them having all the inventions and space ships you could ever need. They had contaminated the whole countryside so much with rubbish and pollution that there were no plants or animals left.
One day, a little boy was walking on the planet, when he passed a cave and noticed a small red flower inside. The flower was very sick - almost dying - so the boy carefully dug up the flower, with roots, soil and everything. Then, he started looking for a place where he could look after it. He searched all over the planet, but everywhere was so contaminated that there was no place the flower could possibly live in. Then he looked up at the sky and noticed the moon. It seemed to the boy that maybe the plant could survive there.
So the little boy put on his astronaut suit, and climbed into a spaceship. He put the little red flower in the back, and off they went to the moon.
Far away from all that pollution - and with the boy visiting it every day to tend it - the flower started to grow. The flower was so well cared for, that it had soon germinated, giving birth to others, and these other flowers spread onto other flowers. Before long, the whole moon was completely covered with flowers.
That's why, whenever the little boy's flowers open up, for a few minutes the moon takes on a soft red sheen, like a warning light. Maybe it's telling us that if you don't look after your planet, a day will come when flowers will only be able to grow on the moon.
Who do you think this story is written for? It is showing you that there was pollution there and rubbish everywhere.
How do you know this?
Because it says it in the story the message
Who do you think the artwork is designed for?
To show people to remember the things they loved
What is the message behind the story?
They are trying to tell people to remember.
How do you know what the message is?
Because it is showing them
What do you like about this piece of writing?
It is pretty good for people to remember and help i am sad that it was pollution there was a lot of rubbish.
What don’t you like about this text?
I don’t like about it when it is pollution and there is a lot of rubbish everywhere.
Tuesday 12 June 2018
An Effective Leader
What Makes an Effective Leader?
Introduction - we are going to be asking about what effective leaders.
Paragraph 1 - What makes a person a good leader ? by listening to the teacher
or listening to your tutor or the coach who ever it is that makes you a good leader.
By not talking about your life you need to focus on your work you can talk about
it when your not a school.
Paragraph 2 - what a good leader does ? you need to stop think and do before you
do it why because that’s how you get good grades and that’s how you become a
good leader that’s is what a good leader does
Paragraph 3 - why do we need to become a leader? So you can show what you
can do and if you are scared just practice and face your fear. Practice everyday
before you get chosen
Paragraph 4 - why is so important being a leader? It is very good to be a good leader
because you can learn more and find more information about what your going to be
saying. It is very fun to do it.
Paragraph 5 - am i ready for whatever's coming ? yes why i said yes
because it is good for you. Why so people know what’s happening
today and who won anything they did they need people to shake peoples
hands when they received what they have gotten.
Conclusion - i have finished talking about why is it so important being a
leader it is very important .
The end of the writing
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