You have used lots of adjectives and your senses to describe the chocolate - Ka pai! We will keep working on using clear, full sentences so that your audience can easily understand what they read. My favourite part of this was when you compared the melting chocolate to waves on a waterfall - how beautiful!
Hi Maria,
ReplyDeleteYou have used lots of adjectives and your senses to describe the chocolate - Ka pai! We will keep working on using clear, full sentences so that your audience can easily understand what they read. My favourite part of this was when you compared the melting chocolate to waves on a waterfall - how beautiful!
thx you for commenting Mrs stone i will keep working on using clear, full sentences.
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