show don't tell

Show Don’t Tell

I am a child and my parent was in the war. He was my great great
grandfather he went into the war that was when i was not even born
yet that's when my mum was a child he went to war. But he had past
away my mum was sad that he was gone and

she only had a little time with him.

this is what we were doing for writing it was about the war we were making up
a short story about the war