One sunny day there was a sale sign on my grass
outside my window. She walks down the stairs
past the rooms. Towards the door when she stops to unlock
the door, she walks down my path to the mailbox
walk around then turn. she read the sign it said free
helping job you get paid. She ran inside. She said
I can afford to pay off my money that she
needed to pay. When she was talking about it she
called the person that owns it. She said hello, she was
asking if she could sign up for the job he said fantastic
one person, he said yes. So we need to start at
7:00 am she got ready had breakfast went in the
the car drove to the place when she got there. She was
carrying stuff putting it in the truck so after that
she went to dig up a hole for the seeds to grow for
food, it started to get darker so she went to the boss
said can she go home now I'm finished he said NO you
are staying here forever. What no way, This is what
you sign up. no, I sign up so she can get paid But she tried to go, But when she was running he pulled
her back. So she stayed in a dirty bed with others.
She was saying in her sleep that she wishes to
go home saying that she wishes she wouldn't saw
that sigh ever she was stake as a slave.
The end
Hi Maria,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great idea to write a story from the perspective of someone who has been sold into slavery! I really enjoyed reading the story and thinking how much everything changed for the main character. Don't forget to chose whether to write in first person (I, me, my) or third person (she, the girl) when you write a story and stick to one.