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Monday 6 May 2019

Show don't tell?

Show Don’t Tell

There was a war happening, there was a good soldier that has been working so hard that one of his arms came off he was shot by one of them. He has got sent to one of the nurses to get help when he was getting help he said I am getting up there is no way somebody stopping me from this war when he got his gun he got some help when he started shooting when he blew a bomb and the end there were only 3 people that survive the war because there was only 3 big bombs that had been shooter when he was walking over he got shot and the other team started shooting 3 of them and they had died, then he passed away, everyone will remember what it has done to us

Task description :

Today we have been given writing at the end of it we needed to make up your own story about the war it  needed to be short so this is my own writing that i have made up.

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